This is what I've been working on. Since the critique I've really been trying to develop this image, and have a reason for what's going on. I asked some friends to tell me what they see when they look at it, or what stands out to them. This was really helpful! My roommate told me that the colors and the texture really stand out to her. And that there's a lot of depth and that makes her feel like she's really part of this space. She said the scene looks peaceful. And she feels like she's looking at God's creation; makes her feel connected to life around her.
I was happy to hear all of this! A lot of it is what I was going for and I hadn't really discussed that with her. I also asked my boyfriend: He said the darker path on the left intrigued him. Like he felt like you're supposed to want to go where the light is, in the back, but something about the other one made him want to go there.
Since the critique I've been working on giving this piece more meaning. I made the back path very light. This is representing the path in life that is best for you, that you should take. Some of the branches and leaves seem to be pointing you in this direction. But there is the dark path to the left. You want to know what's down this path even though it's dark/ dangerous.

